Thursday 30 October 2014

Eric's adventure

Bored bored bored I can't believe my parents sent me to Canada to studdy English I don't know any one and there is nothing to do Eric complained. He sat in the park at the edge of the forest looking up as the clouds passed by. Then he looked into the forest his teacher warned him to stay in the park but he was curious so he walked through the trees after a short while he found a secret tunnel...Eric walked through the tunnel he saw pink smoke coming out of a chimney it looked like candy floss almost. Eric wanted to see what it was so he keeped walking till he found a sugruy ginger bread house but it wasn't the normal kind it was a giant one with surbert icing he was curios to see inside. Ericwent inside to find something so disappointing there inside was an old lady reading an book he was disappointed he dicied to leave but just as he touched the door nob the old lady wasn't an old lady anymore she was a terrafing witch with thick warts green skin a pointy nose and sharp claws he was so terrified. After a while the witch said you may leave Eric was so shocked so he stepped out the door to find himself falling down an thin well. A while later he found himself in an icey blue eglo it was very cold especialy since he was wearing a sninglet an a pair of shorts. Eric decided to try an find his way back but it was inpossible there where so many bilzards it wasn't real but then he realised he was in a story that he was writing about he also realised there was a portal but he didn't finish writing about it will it work? Eric went out hunting for the portal. After 6 hrs he found it so he jumped in it and it work he was back from his adventure and he hopes it won't happen again the end by saskia.
 

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