Thursday 30 October 2014

The tunnel in the forest

The tunnel had cobwebs hanging from the roof and little glowing lights too.
Eric crawled through as he was crawling through there were lots of dead bugs.
Then suddently Eric bumped into this big tree there was a Door on it so he opened it and went in.     
He saw this wonderful place with a river with blossom trees it was the best thing he had ever seen.
Then he looked to his left he saw dead bushes and a big fiery castle it looked horrible it was as red as blood and had little black dots on it.
At first he was afraid to go up to the castle but then he toughened up and walked towards it.
He knocked on the 50 foot tall door then a voice bellowed out who's there then Eric looked up right there was a 43foot tall giant!!
Eric ran and the giant followed him he ran towards the door he just made it through the giant followed him then a massive rock fell on his head he cried out NOOOO!!!!!!!!
The giant disappeared  never to be seen again.
Eric ran back  to the park and just then his teacher showed up and they went back to studying and lived happily ever after. The End.

By Hayley


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